I INCLUDED MORE DIALOGUE, MORE ACTIONS, MORE TRANSITIONS AND MORE LOCATIONS. THIS WAS BECAUSE THE FIRST SCRIPT LACKED DETAIL AND THE DURATION OF THE FILM WOULD HAVE LASTED ABOUT 2 MINUTES WHICH ISN'T ENOUGH MORE A SHORT FILM SO WE HAD TO LENGTHEN IT OUT AND ALLOW THE CHARACTERS TO EXPRESS THEMSELVES MORE. WHICH BUILDS UP THE STORYLINE AND CLIMAX