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"The storyline was clear enough to understand, my favourite part of the film was the rewind because it revealed that the murder scenes never happened and it made you think what if..."- ROSALIND WEST

"The film was alright. The camera was a bit shaky at some scenes. The storyline didn't make sense. I didn't understand why a girl would do this to her friends all because they didn't want her to be at the sleepover. Also the time lapse lhad no relevance and there wasn't enough transitions being used. aLSO ANOTHER THING WAS THAT SOME SCENES WERE FILMED AT DAYTIME AND SOME WERE FILMED AT NIGHT SO AS THE AUDIENCE IT CONFUSED ME INTO THINKING WHETHER SHE KILLED ALL HER FRIENDS ALL IN ONE NIGHT OR IF IT WAS DONE IN SEPERATE DAYS."- ANONYMOUS

"GRIPPING AND THRILLINGLY SPONTANEOUS"- JENNIFER STEPHENS

The film was engaging. it really did leave me at the edge of my seat because it makes you think whether the female protagonist was actually going to kill the other characters or not. The scene I felt that was effective was the rewind scenes. This is because after watching the whole film you feel that she has just murdered all of her friends but then it rewind and diverts back to the bedroom scene when she gets made fun off so it shows the audience that it was all in her head"- Richard Bowler

Statistical Results

EXAMPLES OF SOME OF THE FEEDBACK FROM OUR AUDIENCE.

Audience Feedback

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The strengths that we gathered from the audience feedback was that it was very gripping. Also they felt as though we exceeded the purpose of the psychological thriller genre because it left the audience feeling confused as well as a sense of relief. The quick camera movements left the audience at the edge of their scene, building up the climax. they also found the sound very effective. the sound effect was eerie and tense in order to create shock within the audience. 
The negative feedback that we got from our audience was that at some parts the audience felt as though the camera was too shaky, especially in the second see when the wo characters were walking out of school. In order for us to improve it next time we will either use a track and dolly or use a steady tripod. This is because we used a handheld camera. Also another critical feedback we were given was that some scenes were unecessary . for example the time lapse. However we used it to portray that time went by from noon to night time.
HAVING HEARD FEEDBACK FROM OTHERS. IF WE WERE TO DO THE SHORT FILM AGAIN  THE Things we would change is to change the sound quality and the video quality because at some scenes the wind took over the dialogue so you could not really hear their voices because we did not block the ambient sounds. Also to show the relevance of the time lapse scene that we put in.
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